DarkerSarah

This poem is so very real. Its flow is so smooth and unstoppable. Absolute lovely. because I’m a human being and I must feel something even if its just a ...

Very, very well written, and a very plausible theory. There is a very nice flow to this piece. Your thoughts are balanced, and have theoretical evidence to back them up. ...

I liked this a lot. Mostly because of the imagery. I agree somewhat with Incandescence that it is a bit cliche, but poetry in and of itself is cliche I ...

I think you could spice your essay up a little, but, generally it was good. I find it interesting that hanging is legal in Delaware and Washington...I would think that ...

Firestarter: I liked it, but it wasn't very well written. My thoughts exactly. The plot was fairly good. I mean, the religious history was interesting, but it would have been ...

Hey. I liked this, it just needs some editting, methinks. I really like the way it starts off, the first paragraph, and in McDonald's. Except...if the guy, Adam Shorn, was ...

This is such a good start. The main two things I don't like are the name 'Bob' and the fact that they all just woke up in front of this ...

I really like the beginning when you are describing the ship. I wish you took as much time (or more) on describing and introducing the characters. I think that this ...

Haha...I think it's important to know your parts of speech and grammar when writing a story so: adjectives: descriptive words, i.e. pretty, sad, monstrous...adverbs modify a verb: slowly, very, merril

A rose-petal morning rose over the Nightlands. I really like "rose-petal morning" but I don't think you should use "rose" twice in that sentence, even though their denotations are different. ...

This moves pretty quickly, and gets the reader interested in what's going to happen. Since there really isn't much to review, and as others have covered most of what I'd ...