DarkenedPens

Short and sweet, nice. I'm not exactly sure if you meant this in a literal sense or not. It really does imply it. Despite the small author's note embedded with ...

Well that certainly is deep on multiple aspects. With just these six words it's clear a bigger message is hidden here. I have to admit that it is a bit ...

Aw this is sweet. I like how expressive the characters are throughout the story, that's a good thing to have. You're also really descriptive. You can really imagine what's going ...

This is really sweet, pretty beautiful if you ask me. It reminds me of some old poems I've seen while web-surfing some book quotes, haha. My critique, (if you want ...