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Re: nothing friendly, nothing pleasant
you're right Jaja!! it was deffiently a step up from the first one :) i absoluetly love your poetry you touch on things i'm sure no one else would dare ...
Jun 9, 2011 -
Re: Extraordinary: Chapter 1
your story needs more description really then you'll be in good besides the mistakes with your tenses which to be honest i have problems with that too, but when you ...
Jun 3, 2011 -
Re: Bloodlust
i think this story was absoluetly awesome and i'm curious to see what happened to El obviously i think you should make it into a series because it really is ...
Jun 3, 2011 -
Re: Disgrace to Wolf - 1
i love this story alot :) it wasn't like what i've read in a while and it's sweet like (i dun know? something super sweet) i also like that they ...
Jun 3, 2011 -
Re: Frozen Rose - Part 1 (Rated for swearing.)
hi i'm completely new at this so bare with me here, overall it was a good story yes you do have some problems but they're easy fixes. repitution wasn't too ...
Jun 3, 2011