DarkShadow

you're right Jaja!! it was deffiently a step up from the first one :) i absoluetly love your poetry you touch on things i'm sure no one else would dare ...

your story needs more description really then you'll be in good besides the mistakes with your tenses which to be honest i have problems with that too, but when you ...

i think this story was absoluetly awesome and i'm curious to see what happened to El obviously i think you should make it into a series because it really is ...

i love this story alot :) it wasn't like what i've read in a while and it's sweet like (i dun know? something super sweet) i also like that they ...

hi i'm completely new at this so bare with me here, overall it was a good story yes you do have some problems but they're easy fixes. repitution wasn't too ...