Dakushau

Thank you for the review Noelle. I'm glad you found it interesting. I know there are definitely some parts that need correcting and improving and I will make sure to ...

Thank you for the review, I enjoyed it. No matter how good a story is, there's always room for improvement and I enjoy hearing other peoples comments and opinions. I ...

Thank you for the review! I hate it when my computer misses those spelling errors. That's one of the reasons I write on the computer, to avoid spelling errors. Another ...

Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked it. I was sitting around a few weeks ago wanting to write something but I didn't know what I wanted to write. ...

Yeah it would be strange if he had been in a comma, haha :) I'm planning to rewrite parts of it and expand on it and just flesh it out ...

Thank you for the review. I will consider what you said.

Hey Hannah! Thanks for reviewing my work! I'm glad you liked it. I've been meaning to put up more of my works but there either all only half finished or ...

Don't tell yourself that. Writing, like everything else, takes practice. You'll only get better the more you practice, the more you try. When I look at some of the things ...

Hello. I was going to read this and review it... but there's no story...

This is great. I love it. I have to agree with niteowl in that it might be better with line breaks. Other than that I think it was great.

Hello. I just wanted to say I thought this was well written and a good story. I could easily picture it in my mind and felt like I was right ...