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Daisuki

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Counting the Stars

    So sad, but an amazing poem. It rhymes well, it brings emotions, and it's very touching. I love it so much and it is a pleasure to read, although it ...

    Mar 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Slaughtered Over Kind Words

    This was a really intense poem. I don't know if it's just my stupidity, but I can't quite grasp the meaning of this. Did the person speaking help someone and ...

    Mar 14, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Deleted 92

    I like this! It is a very sweet and touching read. I do think Gracie could be a deeper character, but other than that I really enjoyed this. I loved ...

    Mar 14, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: The Greatest Matchmaking Challenge Ever: Ch.6

    Okay, so I was going to try not to review until the end because I was reviewing every chapter and I thought that might get annoying. I'm sorry I'm not ...

    Mar 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Morgan's Lullaby

    I loved this. It was simple sweet and it really made me smile. Whoever it's written for (I guess Morgan) is very, very lucky. My favorite part: There's more to ...

    Mar 7, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: The Greatest Matchmaking Challenge Ever: Ch. 5 (new!)

    The characters are really progressing and getting better and better. Their relationship is highly entertaining and again, the dialogue is very natural. I know I keep saying that, but dialogue ...

    Mar 6, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Clueless

    I loved this! I like how your charcters seemed very real and believable. The story was nice, and I loved the ending a lot. It wasn't mushy, but it was ...

    Mar 6, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Paper Hearts And Bagels Pt2

    Best! Great ending to a great beginning!! I loved the humor and I love the figurative language you used like, "she avoided him like heart disease," or something like that. ...

    Mar 5, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Paper Hearts And Bagels Pt. 1

    I loved it! I always like romance stories like these! I love it when the guy and girl insult each other, but end up growing very close. I can't wait ...

    Mar 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Paint

    I don't know much about styles and techniques of poetry, but it sounded great! I love the way you used paint to get across that someone is hiding pain. I ...

    Mar 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Looking

    Ah, yes! I was thinking she might have crashed when she was looking at her phone. That makes a lot of sense. But she didn't die right away, did she? ...

    Mar 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Tomorrow.

    It kinda scared me, but in a good way - showing that the words are effective. Insanity is always a creepily fascinating subject. I think the poem flowed really well, ...

    Mar 4, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Never-ending Quest for Love

    I really enjoyed reading this and also felt I could connect to it. Everyone wants someone that understands them completely, right? I think you portrayed that beautifully. Letters can often ...

    Mar 4, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Unicorn (contest entry)

    I like how the writing flowed easily in most parts. It was an enjoyable read as well as extremely entertaining. I thought it was very original and it had a ...

    Mar 4, 2011


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