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Re: Counting the Stars
So sad, but an amazing poem. It rhymes well, it brings emotions, and it's very touching. I love it so much and it is a pleasure to read, although it ...
Mar 14, 2011 -
Re: Slaughtered Over Kind Words
This was a really intense poem. I don't know if it's just my stupidity, but I can't quite grasp the meaning of this. Did the person speaking help someone and ...
Mar 14, 2011 -
Re: Deleted 92
I like this! It is a very sweet and touching read. I do think Gracie could be a deeper character, but other than that I really enjoyed this. I loved ...
Mar 14, 2011 -
Re: The Greatest Matchmaking Challenge Ever: Ch.6
Okay, so I was going to try not to review until the end because I was reviewing every chapter and I thought that might get annoying. I'm sorry I'm not ...
Mar 7, 2011 -
Re: Morgan's Lullaby
I loved this. It was simple sweet and it really made me smile. Whoever it's written for (I guess Morgan) is very, very lucky. My favorite part: There's more to ...
Mar 7, 2011 -
Re: The Greatest Matchmaking Challenge Ever: Ch. 5 (new!)
The characters are really progressing and getting better and better. Their relationship is highly entertaining and again, the dialogue is very natural. I know I keep saying that, but dialogue ...
Mar 6, 2011 -
Re: Clueless
I loved this! I like how your charcters seemed very real and believable. The story was nice, and I loved the ending a lot. It wasn't mushy, but it was ...
Mar 6, 2011 -
Re: Paper Hearts And Bagels Pt2
Best! Great ending to a great beginning!! I loved the humor and I love the figurative language you used like, "she avoided him like heart disease," or something like that. ...
Mar 5, 2011 -
Re: Paper Hearts And Bagels Pt. 1
I loved it! I always like romance stories like these! I love it when the guy and girl insult each other, but end up growing very close. I can't wait ...
Mar 5, 2011 -
Re: Paint
I don't know much about styles and techniques of poetry, but it sounded great! I love the way you used paint to get across that someone is hiding pain. I ...
Mar 4, 2011 -
Re: Looking
Ah, yes! I was thinking she might have crashed when she was looking at her phone. That makes a lot of sense. But she didn't die right away, did she? ...
Mar 4, 2011 -
Re: Tomorrow.
It kinda scared me, but in a good way - showing that the words are effective. Insanity is always a creepily fascinating subject. I think the poem flowed really well, ...
Mar 4, 2011 -
Re: The Never-ending Quest for Love
I really enjoyed reading this and also felt I could connect to it. Everyone wants someone that understands them completely, right? I think you portrayed that beautifully. Letters can often ...
Mar 4, 2011 -
Re: The Unicorn (contest entry)
I like how the writing flowed easily in most parts. It was an enjoyable read as well as extremely entertaining. I thought it was very original and it had a ...
Mar 4, 2011
