DaiJia

Thanks for point out the errors! I made edits to them! Also thanks for reading the story. I am already working on the next chapter, so be sure to look ...

Thank you for your review! I've only started to write recently, and I wrote this story without any real planning; I literally wrote this off the top of my head ...

It was slightly less "warm" than I had expected, but over all, a well worded and very relatable poem. I always turn to a warm glass of milk at night ...

This is a satirical gem. I really enjoyed reading this, partially because I have seen my parents do this quite a lot. However, I must say that the transition of ...

Thank you! I'm going to write a follow-up that focuses mainly on the events leading up to the untimely deaths of the astronauts and the malfunction itself. So yeah!

Thank you for the review! The prompt I wrote this off of was "Write about a countdown" so I admit I didn't entire focus well on the malfunction itself. I ...