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Re: Whirlpool Love
Hi Unconsoled. I'm going to divide my review up into these sections: What works, what doesn't, and suggestions. I enjoy your short story, and it'd be my pleasure to get ...
Feb 19, 2015 -
Re: DELETED 54
Hi Lumi. Basically, I'm going to arrange my review into the sections: What works, what doesn't and suggestions. I've read your poem three times over, and I don't believe I've ...
Feb 19, 2015 -
Re: I'm sorry that I lied to both you and me
Interesting story you have there. Here's how it's going to work with me. I'll talk about what works first then what doesn't, and then I'll do my best to give ...
Feb 19, 2015 -
Re: The Lay of Middlebrass
I have never been a big fan of flash fiction, so keep that in mind. Not everyone's going to be. Just as not everyone's going to be a fan of ...
Feb 16, 2015 -
Re: Left
Brevity and simplicity. Your poem embodies these two perfectly. At first glance, a poem about forsaken love seems clichéd, but you made no pretensions, and prevailed in the end. At ...
Feb 2, 2015 -
Re: Beneath the Ground
Hello. I am The Raven, Knight of the Green Room, and I will be reviewing your work at this moment. Lucky for you, I have conceived of a new system ...
Dec 2, 2013 -
Re: Dada
Hi again Deanie, The Raven here, Knight of the Green Room, ready to review your work. My review, as usual, will be divided up into the sections 'What Is Good' ...
Nov 27, 2013 -
Re: Release
Hi Deanie, I am The Raven, Knight of the Green Room, and I will be reviewing your poem here. My review will be divided into the sections 'What Is Good' ...
Nov 25, 2013 -
Re: Monsters
Hello EloquentDragon. As you may know, I am The Raven, Knight of the Green Room, and I will be reviewing your work at this particular moment. My review will be ...
Nov 21, 2013 -
Re: Xia - Prologue
Hi, I am The Raven, Knight of the Green Room, and I will be reviewing your work at this moment. My review will be divided into the sections 'What Is ...
Nov 20, 2013 -
Re: Endless Summer
Hello! I am The Raven, Knight of the Green Room, and I will be reviewing your work at this current moment. My review will be divided up into the sections ...
Nov 19, 2013 -
Re: Dear no one, I think I need a dollar.
Hi Deanie, I am The Raven, Knight of the Green Room, and I will be reviewing your work at this particular moment. My review will be divided up into the ...
Nov 18, 2013 -
Re: Network of Keys Chapter 6: Ky, First Floor/Level part 1
Hi. I am The Raven, Knight of the Green Room, and I will be reviewing your work at this moment. My review will be divided into the sections 'What Is ...
Nov 16, 2013 -
Re: Last Night
Hi, I am The Raven, Knight of the Green Room, and I will be reviewing your work at this moment. My review will be divided into the sections 'What Is ...
Nov 13, 2013 -
Re: [deleted]
Hi, I am The Raven, Knight of the Green Room, and I will be reviewing your work at this moment. My review will be divided into the sections What Is ...
Nov 10, 2013