Cynder

Thank you that's very helpful actually. I had thought about that but I wrote it late in the night and so it didn't come out as thoughtful as it could ...

So, there's a problem with how the text is being arranged and I can't figure out how to fix it. Can someone please help? Thanks

No problem and I understand where you're coming from. Then, maybe, if you want it more confusing you can incorporate that into it, clearly tell the reader that. But it's ...

I was saying that they 'are pure' rather than they 'are purity.' Though, maybe that sounds better, I don't know. I don't want to change the meaning, however. Thank you ...

My grammar mistakes were trying to convey a certain point, but maybe it came off wrong. I will try and see how to better portray my meaning.

You write such helpful reviews thank you so much!

You are soo right. Even the others agreed. Thank you, really. If you could PM me any specific examples I would be very grateful, if you'd let me tap into ...

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