Cynara

Hey Dark Eyed Pixie! Something that caught my eye was that you missed a lot of periods (something that I do a lot too.). Example: “Ok, 45 minutes to kill” ...

You have a lot of mistakes here. For example: [/quote]My name is coriander phillips i was born in england in 1975 with the horror and misery that lies within me ...

I think you should continue writing this story. I enjoyed it very much and loved how the characters get along. I also liked your descriptions. Please keep writing! I'll look ...