CuteBalletDancer7

Hello, I got to say that this is a good poem. I think that you used repetitive quite well and had a nice flow to the poem. A few things: ...

Hello Ann, Good poem. All you need to do is format your poem like Hart said above. Other than that, it had nice flow and emotion to it. I can ...

This a good poem, with nice voice and passion. I'm really glad that you used poetry to get your feelings out. I like how you use a list, I haven't ...

I really enjoyed this poem. It had a nice flow to it. I liked how you add a voice to the bird. It made the poem more animated and added ...

This is a lovely poem. I like the word choice; you used some pretty good words that added the poetic flow to your poem. Also, I like the repetitiveness at ...