CursedTorch

Hi, I have a review for you! 1. I really like the way you used physical spacing in your poem to show distance, and I think it created a sense ...

hello, I like your repetition and how that led me (aka the reader) to focus more on the sentences that were different, the way they were juxtaposed. (E.g. felt vs. ...

Hi, I really liked your poem. I think that putting "edgy" and "stupid" on their own lines was a good choice to make them stand out, but the latter should ...