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Haha, yeah. I'm in a writing workshop and been writing a lot recently, then I suddenly realized I hadn't posted any of it. At all. So I may have spammed ...

Thanks for the comment. I'm glad you think it all goes together well, that you like it. Otherwise, Mountain Everlasting is a type of flower, if that helps.

Beautiful. Then we have the bit on the camera. I'm not sure if it was meant to be humor (probably), but it made me grin like a loon. It's plain ...

Wait, one thing: "He looked around, a bit of an ominous smile." Maybe try this: "He looked around, a bit of an ominous smile on his face."

Hey! Awesome short story. I really wasn't expecting the ending! It was very short, sweet, and to the point. I think you should make it into a novel, by the ...

I would just like to say thank you guys for actually giving me what I probably needed, even if my stubbornness showed a little when I didn't want to respond ...

Hmmm, true. If I left off where Cyriac killed Erasmus, do you think that would be better? I'd describe how a bit better, then re-post and keep the rest for ...

Well, for now it's a short story for a contest that has to involve mythical creatures. My variant of Cain and Abel I suppose. And I'll work on that. Not ...