CrystalWoolf

You are welcome and I guess I shall have to make due. Thank you for the information :) ...I tend to write LONG stories so that is why I was ...

Thank you for your feedback and I planned on including the parts of the history as I write but not all at once so that the reader isn't feeling as ...

Thank you and I plan on continuing :)

Umm, I did add a female...The character narrating this part is female and an OC. If it was Sherlock I would have made him more intelligent. Sherlock gets introduced later ...

Thank you so much and you are helping. I realize I need to be constantly trying to go out of my comfort zone of a handful of words and use ...

Really you plan on publishing this piece of work? In that case I guess I should be more thorough in my responses. I too am planning on publishing a few ...

Very intriguing. First off I really enjoyed the way you started out by speaking to the reader. The dream was a nice touch as well. As a reader I got ...

Interesting but at the same time it is more of a philosophical question which I can appreciate but at the same time I prefer reading novels. As the person below ...