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Re: A Red Sunrise (updated 21.8.07)
A Red Sunrise (version 2!) It was early dawn, the sun just breaking over the horizon, shining off the sea. A few of the bolder waves lapped against my bare ...
Aug 22, 2007 -
Re: The Sorceror's Descendant-Prolouge:Dark beginnings
Prologue – A dark beginning Lightning flashed across the night sky and rain poured down endlessly from the heavens as Kyvor slowly made his way up the winding path. His ...
Aug 22, 2007 -
Re: The Sorceror's Descendant-Chapter 1: Summer's end
Chapter 1 – Summer’s end Seth sat at the breakfast bar, absently eating a bowl of cereal while lamenting the end of the summer holidays. He had grudgingly woken up ...
Aug 22, 2007 -
Re: Hy
Well, it was good, I must say. There are a few problems I noticed, though: 1) I was quite confused when you mentioned his brother having a tail. I thought ...
Aug 22, 2007 -
Re: The Supernatural & Me
Well, its quite good. But I think you shouldn't have the girl leave her body. I think it would be much better if she did all of that and she ...
Aug 22, 2007
