Critical_Point

This is my first real piece of writing (at least my first piece that doesn't deserve to be immediatly destroyed). Please review!!!TaranThe horse's warm back beneath me was a great ...

Dallin, ScoutThe men and I tiptoed softly through the forest. We had been sent out by the captain to locate the wolves' den. The wolves had been wrecking our supplies ...

TaranI watched them leave the tent and decided that I would have to trust them for the time being. But before I could feel safe with them I would have ...

Dallin, scoutI finally retired to my tent after what had been an unusual day. The haul through the woods had been tiring and finding the girl had come as a ...

Here's chapter five. Please comment!-PointTaranPainful memories rushed through my mind. Things that I had tried to ignore surfaced. The shock of finally understanding that the brother I had known was ...