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It was green. I also really loved this line. so many people forget to put good to honest imagery in their poetry, and this really gave me a picture of ...

;D I'm so glad that it is so well loved! :D

Thank you superchipmunk. :) xD So did I actually, I don't know how I really knew about that sort of stuff... then again, I probably heard the phrase in a ...

:o KAH, this was amazing! This review told me all I wanted to know *cough*hear*cough*! xD

You know what, I hate the second version, and I'm going to get rid of it. xD Thank you heybeccahey! :D

Thank you Warrior Princess. :) I actually didn't know what a prose was, until I looked it up, so thanks for the new knowlage too! :D

Thanks again Sporks, this was really useful, and like the feedback in your last review, I will certainly take it into account. :D I will double check all my grammar ...

Thank you so much for this thorough review, especially how you pointed out the key little bits that really make a difference. I'm so glad that you enjoyed reading it. ...

xD I can't believe I spelt that wrong! -shot- Thank you both for your feeback, I do agree with the 'Throughout' part, and will change that. :) Thanks again! ~Crimmy

Hey there Rach, thanks for your critique, I will definitely take it into account. I'm going to PM you some questions about a couple of things you said, just to ...

Wow, this is a realy beautiful poem. I honestly can't find anything that needs to be changed. This poem is short sweet, an easy read and a really nice read ...

Thank you iheartbooks. :) I did actually spend about fifteen minutes trying to find some sort of message in there. Nope, nothing, just nonsense. xD I'm glad you think it's ...

This is a really powerful poem. I really like it, I can't actually find anything apart from what Jamie already said.

Oh good! I'm glad that it improved. >.< My amateur side coming through there I suppose. Hahaha. xD That sounds like a good idea, I'll have to play around with ...

Thank you so much Kiwisatsuma! This has been so helpful, I have Pm'd you with some questions, and what I've changed. Sorry to be a bother. >.