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Re: "Perfect" Chemistry
I always thought that the original quote 'all that glisters is not gold' was from The Merchant of Venice by Shakespeare but that been adapted over time. I could be ...
May 23, 2014 -
Re: Broken Glass
Hey Deanie, thank you for taking the time to review! Your reviews always point out stuff that I totally miss - so thank you! Totally didn't realise the typo, so ...
May 3, 2014 -
Re: Daisies
Thank you very much for your review! I completely understand what you mean - I'll probably make some changes to this when I have the time. Thanks again.
May 3, 2014 -
Re: I tried to write a poem
Deanie! Thank you so much for your review - it was really helpful! I'm sorry I haven't replied to this sooner, I'm back at boarding school so I won't be ...
Apr 24, 2014 -
Re: I long to catch the ocean
Thank you!
Apr 22, 2014 -
Re: Let our Fingers Dance
Ah, I got really confused too when I was new. What I tend to do is: 1. Click the on the left of the top toolbar when posting/editing your work. ...
Apr 21, 2014 -
Re: I long to catch the ocean
Your review really touched me. Thank you so much for taking the time to comment on my work, thank you. Your comments mean a lot to me - I'm so ...
Apr 21, 2014 -
Re: I long to catch the ocean
Thank you for your review, Starleene! You are completely right about that third stanza, I need to review that and try and rework it to flow a little more. Thanks ...
Apr 21, 2014 -
Re: I long to catch the ocean
Thank you for your review! You're right about the third stanza, I might have to jig that about a bit! Thanks again.
Apr 21, 2014 -
Re: She could almost be beautiful.
Pleasure, message me if you have any questions about what I said :)
Apr 20, 2014 -
Re: Broken Glass
Hi there, thanks for your review! I'll take your advice on board and maybe teak it a little. :)
Apr 20, 2014 -
Re: Broken Glass
Thank you for the review. Those are fair points, I may go back and edit this at some point.
Apr 17, 2014 -
Re: Broken Glass
Thank you for the review. Those are fair points, I may go back and edit this at some point.
Apr 17, 2014 -
Re: Broken Glass
Thank you for your review. Well this poem wasn't intentionally meant to be about heartbreak (I assume you mean in the romantic sense). It was written about a friendship that ...
Apr 16, 2014 -
Re: Broken Glass
I fixed the 'a' problem. Thank you for your review!
Apr 16, 2014
