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  • Poetry » General, General Re: "Perfect" Chemistry

    I always thought that the original quote 'all that glisters is not gold' was from The Merchant of Venice by Shakespeare but that been adapted over time. I could be ...

    May 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Broken Glass

    Hey Deanie, thank you for taking the time to review! Your reviews always point out stuff that I totally miss - so thank you! Totally didn't realise the typo, so ...

    May 3, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Daisies

    Thank you very much for your review! I completely understand what you mean - I'll probably make some changes to this when I have the time. Thanks again.

    May 3, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: I tried to write a poem

    Deanie! Thank you so much for your review - it was really helpful! I'm sorry I haven't replied to this sooner, I'm back at boarding school so I won't be ...

    Apr 24, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: I long to catch the ocean

    Thank you!

    Apr 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Literature Re: Let our Fingers Dance

    Ah, I got really confused too when I was new. What I tend to do is: 1. Click the on the left of the top toolbar when posting/editing your work. ...

    Apr 21, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: I long to catch the ocean

    Your review really touched me. Thank you so much for taking the time to comment on my work, thank you. Your comments mean a lot to me - I'm so ...

    Apr 21, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: I long to catch the ocean

    Thank you for your review, Starleene! You are completely right about that third stanza, I need to review that and try and rework it to flow a little more. Thanks ...

    Apr 21, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: I long to catch the ocean

    Thank you for your review! You're right about the third stanza, I might have to jig that about a bit! Thanks again.

    Apr 21, 2014
  • Poetry » Supernatural, Fantasy Re: She could almost be beautiful.

    Pleasure, message me if you have any questions about what I said :)

    Apr 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Broken Glass

    Hi there, thanks for your review! I'll take your advice on board and maybe teak it a little. :)

    Apr 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Broken Glass

    Thank you for the review. Those are fair points, I may go back and edit this at some point.

    Apr 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Broken Glass

    Thank you for the review. Those are fair points, I may go back and edit this at some point.

    Apr 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Broken Glass

    Thank you for your review. Well this poem wasn't intentionally meant to be about heartbreak (I assume you mean in the romantic sense). It was written about a friendship that ...

    Apr 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Broken Glass

    I fixed the 'a' problem. Thank you for your review!

    Apr 16, 2014


sometimes i don't consider myself a poet but then i remember that i literally write poetry
— chikara