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Like I said it was probably just me :)

whoa dramatic :O

Wow this is deep. Well at least the way I took it, it's deep. I like how you used a sinking boat as a metaphor. I suck at poetry so ...

This was simply hilarious! It wasn't a story in the normal sense but yet it was... that makes absolutely no sense I'm sorry. I thought it was funny... both because ...

Thanks so much. It's rather hard to stay mysterious- at least for me. Thank you for reading :)

Thank you very much :)

This makes me think too much. It's a really great poem and I like how you compare life/time to a path. It makes it somewhat easier to wrap your head ...

Thank you very much for reviewing! And ya I need to check my grammar before I post.... I have a problem with that :/

Thank you for reviewing. I do have to tell you- it isn't her mother saying these things, it's her. She's putting herself down.

There is nothing wrong with getting inspiration from someone else's work! I don't know about one stanza #8. Others may have problems with you using the first line but I ...

This is a personal experience to me. I just agree so much. Time is something that constantly slips on by. Very dramatic and at first my mind was wandering a ...

Really nice poem. It's a tragic love story in only three stanzas. I think my favorite part is the "memories like dust.... one blow and we are defeated." And I ...

That is beautiful. I don't know if you are truly saying this is real or if it's a work of fiction but either way you wrote it beautifully. I loved ...

The fact that Dayna was willing to forgive her father for all of the abuse he caused her is incredible. To top it off, her thoughts at the end make ...