CrazyWriter

There isn't much I can say to criticize this piece of work really apart from that it might just be a little too much a little too soon. I only ...

I like your poem, but maybe you used the word 'thread' and 'dead' a few too many times? But I absolutely love the opening and I get the picture in ...

No, it's supposed to say 'viscous' check the dictionary

I think it's another word for jaw or something like that

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!