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Re: Eternal Kiss
I think it's great!! Wow. Very delicate, lovely language that sets the tone great. I do agree with Persephonia that you might want to make it smoother. I think it's ...
Aug 8, 2010 -
Re: Love Poem
I think it's a little simple..it's a great emotional thought..like in that small equation we can feel your lonliness; but maybe if that were the title and you wrote a ...
Aug 8, 2010
