Cosmo

sorry I don't know why this sent twice! :/

I intended to taje the behaviour of a regular hummingbird astray. Because this is set in a town or city, not a village or hamlet because beggars don't tend to ...

Typo on the first. I can change the tense, and the last quote is supposed to sound like that. I think it gives a persona to the hummingbirds way of ...

Thanks for the review! I can see what you mean by more of a personal thing, and making it more conclusive as to how it changed me personally. There were ...

Also perhaps change up the structure a bit, make it interesting to look at as well!

You don't need to apologize! You didn't know :) Thank you for the compliment :') I look back at that comment and I seem to be quite abrupt in the ...

The character is me, this actually happened to me, I had quite an abusive first 7 years in school. It was very much hell as I was thrown over walls, ...