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Re: Demons Aren't Evil... Chapter Two
You poor, poor child. You're arguing with your own brain? 90% of mine is manifested by a giant, creepy smiley face that always forces me to blank out and go ...
Jun 13, 2015 -
Re: Mishaps of an Overlord, Lesson 2-- At This Point, You Should Probably Know What a Tilde Is
Hue hue hue hue hue... well at least summer's here :D Thanks for anader rebuew, an' Ah shor dew 'ope dat yew'll dew s'moar o' dem. Can you understand my ...
Jun 12, 2015 -
Re: Mishaps of an Overlord, Lesson 1-- Ripping Off of Other Works, Especially Mangas, is Pretty Bad
Pffft Ali, you were so soft on me I could have taken your review and socked a duckling with it, and the duckling wound't even have noticed.... ('-' ) Your ...
Jun 12, 2015 -
Re: Demons Aren't Evil... Chapter Two
No no no, dun worry about it :P I don't have a set age to begin with, I'm just asking people to guess it based on my actions/speech/etc. Iz fun~~~~~ ...
Jun 10, 2015 -
Re: Demons Aren't Evil... Chapter Two
I see.... Great, now I'm 14. I went from 16 --> 23 --> 17 --> 14. ...What do 14-year-olds do? Dang, I have to do research now...
Jun 10, 2015 -
Re: Demons Aren't Evil... Chapter Two
... Try again. A specific age.
Jun 9, 2015 -
Re: Demons Aren't Evil... Chapter Two
Well... how old do you think I am? :-|
Jun 9, 2015 -
Re: Demons Aren't Evil... Chapter Two
I just read your warning. Now I'm scared :D But fear not! It can't be anywhere near how bad I am at writing...
Jun 8, 2015 -
Re: Demons Aren't Evil... Chapter Two
A NEW CHAPTER!!!! Oh boy oh boy oh-- *dies of excitement before I even got to read* Er. Ehehehehe... I'll review when I get off mobile... :P
Jun 8, 2015 -
Re: Old Lives - Chapter 2
Also, weave some imagery into the plot happenings. Miles seems to be going in and out of the hallway a lot. You can try describing the hallway in slightly more ...
Jun 6, 2015 -
Re: Old Lives - Chapter 2
:-o "Old Lives"... huh... Nice! :D As for the setting, try describing the sounds also. And, you don't want to describe the setting just to describe the setting. Use it ...
Jun 6, 2015 -
Re: Old Lives - Chapter 2
:-o "Old Lives"... huh... Nice! :D As for the setting, try describing the sounds also. And, you don't want to describe the setting just to describe the setting. Use it ...
Jun 6, 2015 -
Re: Old Lives - Chapter 2
:-o "Old Lives"... huh... Nice! :D As for the setting, try describing the sounds also. And, you don't want to describe the setting just to describe the setting. Use it ...
Jun 6, 2015 -
Re: Avery Trent - Chapter 5 (Terra Down)
The name you sign your replies with is so... I don't know how to describe it. It's the kind of name you repeat again and again, and forget you're repeating ...
Jun 6, 2015 -
Re: Avery Trent - Chapter 5 (Terra Down)
Oh... I can't believe I didn't get this obvious reference... ( '-') *bashes head with phone* *tildes~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~*
Jun 5, 2015