Corncob

Whoops. Reading too deep into a poem lol

No problem, friend

Okay, but I'm just going to say the title was massively misleading. I suggest adding an author's note that says what you just says, or something of the variety, because ...

Haha I get it. :D Hey, I major big time edited it. I encourage you to reread it, but feel free to decline. :)

Glad to inspire :) *follows*

Aah, that clears things up a bit. Perhaps make that more clear in the story? I mean, saying outright that he still loves Charlotte totally would spoil it, but maybe ...

Yeah, I think I'm going to try and show more this time by editing it :) Thanks for the review.

Thanks for the review! Do you like molasses?

Where's the Pokemon?

I actually definitely can see this as a rock song, for sure. Welcome to YWS.

Heeyyyyy, have I found another obsesser of YWS over here? Your and my poem should be I Love YWS buddies!

No prob, you deserve it!

That's awesome! @RoyalHighness I just have one question that I was too lazy to put into my review: I'm not quite sure how the first line relates to the rest. ...

Will review ASAIC

Hey-this was really interesting and captured my attention, and the descriptions were gruesome, chilling, but excellent. However, the whole time I was confused, and I still have no idea who ...