ConverseFireGirl

Thank you for the great review! :D I'm so glad you liked it!

Thank you for the review, and I can see your points, so thank you! And I really hope you're okay and stuff gets better :)

I totally understand that it's not at all glamorous, and by my description of "pale smooth skin" I was merely looking at my own wrists which are all of the ...

Thank you for the review, Wonder! :) *tosses sugar cube* Be strong :)

Thank you so much for this review! :D I am so glad that you understand the message here though, and I just fancied to have a change as there are ...

Thank you so much! That review is really helpful! :D

Oh! I wasn't saying nerves were flowing in the blood, I just meant beneath the skin there was nerves, and blood and life. Just basically a list of stuff which ...

Thank you for the review! And I did "branch" because when I was looking at my own wrists to help describe, they just looked like branches... xD So the "Snakes" ...

Aha, I know, right! :D I can really understand though with the "and" that threw me too, but I just had no idea what I'd replace it with. Thank you ...

Ah, thank you so much for the review, and I can totally see your point! :D Thanks again and I'll totally let you know if I have any questions! :D

It's an amazing sport. :D Good job!

Haha! *tosses sugar cube* :D

Thank you for this most helpful review! It had really helped! :D

Thank you so much! :D I'm really glad you liked it :) And I was going to, but I didn't want to ruin it with a really bad part ;D ...

This is an amazing poem, really. I can't even review it. It's just... marvelous. Seriously. Marvelous.