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Re: Diary of King Alexander
Greetings! This is a very good story or, should I say, a very good introduction to a story, a very good set up to one where the protagonist would be ...
Apr 15, 2017 -
Re: draft of start of book any advise welcome!!!
Hey anonymousplease, I just read your introduction and I do have some things to point out about it. But before that, don't worry about negative comments or anything, we're all ...
Apr 13, 2017 -
Re: The Old Centurion of Rome
This might seem strange , but your intro before the story really caught my eye. If you really write those kind of stories , I'd really like to read them ...
Dec 6, 2015 -
Re: A Final Invocation
This is certainly one of my favourites. The description drew me in but the poem it self , its first lines are what kept me reading and what urged me ...
Dec 6, 2015 -
Re: Regretting Helen
Hello , this is a very good poem. From the first moment on , I get the impression you're trying to write in Homer's footsteps , in an Ancient Greek ...
Nov 19, 2015 -
Re: The Great Wilderness
Hello Felistia , this is a very good poem that does exactly what its title suggests , it is a wonderful description of the Great Wilderness , of nature in ...
Nov 1, 2015 -
Re: The Deepening of the Night
Dear ladcat13 , I want you to know from the start that I like your poem. From the first two lines , I liked it and almost subconsciously overlooked its ...
Oct 30, 2015
