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ConcernedGreek

  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: Diary of King Alexander

    Greetings! This is a very good story or, should I say, a very good introduction to a story, a very good set up to one where the protagonist would be ...

    Apr 15, 2017
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: draft of start of book any advise welcome!!!

    Hey anonymousplease, I just read your introduction and I do have some things to point out about it. But before that, don't worry about negative comments or anything, we're all ...

    Apr 13, 2017
  • Short Story » General, Historical Fiction Re: The Old Centurion of Rome

    This might seem strange , but your intro before the story really caught my eye. If you really write those kind of stories , I'd really like to read them ...

    Dec 6, 2015
  • Poetry » Historical Fiction, Fanfiction Re: A Final Invocation

    This is certainly one of my favourites. The description drew me in but the poem it self , its first lines are what kept me reading and what urged me ...

    Dec 6, 2015
  • Poetry » Literature, Historical Fiction Re: Regretting Helen

    Hello , this is a very good poem. From the first moment on , I get the impression you're trying to write in Homer's footsteps , in an Ancient Greek ...

    Nov 19, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: The Great Wilderness

    Hello Felistia , this is a very good poem that does exactly what its title suggests , it is a wonderful description of the Great Wilderness , of nature in ...

    Nov 1, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Deepening of the Night

    Dear ladcat13 , I want you to know from the start that I like your poem. From the first two lines , I liked it and almost subconsciously overlooked its ...

    Oct 30, 2015


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