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Re: dirty dancing
Thissen here's a gooden. I just wish it wasin't so short. That and I found myself reading it all at once and too quickly.
May 16, 2006 -
Re: Poor Little Ingrid
where is your poetry? and I swear if you write about: singing shepards along brittle regements, that apple burns alone, alone, dark, alone. simplicity I will be dissapointed. That writing ...
May 11, 2006 -
Re: Poor Little Ingrid
Freeverse doesn't work any which way. It's just short prose with poetic images.
May 11, 2006 -
Re: Denim sheets and twin sized mattress
This piece is completly free-verse. I am not trying to put across any distinct message, this is a surreal out of body view of what's going on. I've been writing ...
May 11, 2006 -
Re: Motives for Motion
I wouldn't try to sound 'uber cool' by putting words like percieved and via in your criticisms.
May 9, 2006 -
Re: Motives for Motion
Leave your ego at the door little one, no one is challenging you. I can't stand people that try piss on others to feel better about who they are. I ...
May 9, 2006 -
Re: Motives for Motion
Man you guys are young, what's the deal!?
May 9, 2006 -
Re: Immigration Scapegoat
Why would I pretend to be 19? Am I supposed to be younger? Well, these articles are more like little blogs. I'll probably post one every day. What I am ...
May 3, 2006 -
Re: Immigration Scapegoat
This is not some article that has been edited and refined to fit newspapers. In fact, I spent four minutes, coffee and a cigarette on this one. I am not ...
May 3, 2006
