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Re: Beware of the Light (Prologue)
Hi there Moonlade 1. What did I like the most in the story Moonlade is that in the story is saying The water cried out as it hit the floor, ...
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Re: Heartbeat
Hi there starlit 1. What did I like the most in the story starlit is that the story is saying that Most days she relaxes on the ocean. She lays ...
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Re: All Our Yesterdays 1.2
Hi there Elinor 1. What did I like the most in the story Elinor is that in the story it's saying As it turned out, my sister and I would ...
May 24, 2022 -
Re: All Our Yesterdays 1.1
Hi there Elinor 1. What did I like the most in the story Elinor is that in the story Elinor it says That summer, I remember being at a crossroads, ...
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Re: The Monster Whisperer Prologue
Hi there Valkyria 1. What did I like the most in the story Valkyria was that“Hi, Aunt Greta,” said Robert. His voice sounded breathless, and Greta heard noises in the ...
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Re: Candles in the Dark
Hi there Valkyria 1. What did I like the most in the story Valkyria is that “Child, do you know how many girls and older people have summoned me this ...
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Re: Connection - 47
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May 17, 2022
What do i think needs to be improved Rook is that i knew that it be just be a normal story anyway but i really enjoyed reading chapter 47 of ... -
Re: The Tea-Seller
Hi there Rebel 1. What did i like the most in the poem Rebel is that Late in the evening, I stand in delight To check my money and my ...
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Re: a sunlit night
Hi there Elinor 1. What did i like the most in the poem Elinor is that For far too long I have lived my life in darkness. I’ve waded my ...
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Re: One Angel's Wings: Chapter 1, Part 1
Hi there Mea 1. What did i like the most in the story Mea is that In the tiny, cramped confines of the Archpriestess Ashwythe’s antechamber, Fyn was pacing, turning ...
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Re: Prince, Spy, Priest
Hi there Mea 1. What did you like the most in the story Mea is thatFury and purpose clouded Kianto’s vision. He reached the dais in seconds, slaying any black-garbed ...
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Re: Chasing Dragons - Laurel
Hi there Stella 1. What did i like the most in the story Stella is that Every single day, she met the Queen at this time of the afternoon, sometimes ...
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Re: Chasing Dragons 3.2
Hi there Stella 1. What I liked the most in the story Stella is that Astrid sat down on a step, two steps from the bottom. She remained very still. ...
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Re: Chasing Dragons 3.1
Hi there Stella 1. What do i like the most in the story Stella is that The two of them had been half-heartedly heading home to Iron Holdings, since Nathaniel ...
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Re: Chasing Dragons- Chapter Two
Hi there Stella 1. What do i like the most in the story Stella is that Astrid sighed and went to her own bedside, unbuttoning the orange dress and letting ...
May 9, 2022
