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I love it! :)

@Lake, I think it's your turn to be tagged in a literary post! Also @CorruptedArrow, @Sheytato, @DarkPandemonium and @PizzaRoll.

This is beautiful, I'm clapping (on the inside, I'm at school, don't want to draw unwanted attention) and honestly feel depressed that I am a single pringle.

Makes sense to me

Well, you tried. You failed, but you tried XD I skipped gym alot in grade 6 and 7 but got caught and taken to the principal's office. Lesson kinda learnt. ...

Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked the story! I hate gym class and will stress myself sick so often, and I can't control it, so Coralia was kinda ...

In Canada, winter is the epitome of death and despair. It's pitch black at about five o'clock and everything is cold. But nice poem, I really it! :) :)

Actually, I had meant to make the sentences short and sweet in the first paragraph. I will not be polishing anything except maybe some of my word choices; I chose ...

Thanks for the review. I would have done it in more detail but it was an assignment for school that had to be based around memories, so I just did ...

You definitely achieved that XD

(wow that's a long review) but aside from that,thank you so much for the review, I'm glad you liked it :)

Thanks so much for the review. I realize some of my word choices weren't the best.

Thanks :)

Your welcome, and the no capitalization thing makes sense. I just can't help noticing those things when I read; it doesn't matter how deep I am in a book, I ...

Thanks for the review. Yes, this is just a rough draft. I just quickly wrote it and felt eager to post it. Glad you liked it!