Cobra

I've read all of the Edge Chronicles including the Lost Barkscrolls.

Lord of the Flies is quite good, but To Kill a Mockingbird is boring.

The alarm clock part was quite a good touch here - it gave the story a touch of humour, which is good in any story. It might be good if ...

No, I haven't finished the book, and I'm just putting in the occasional extract from different sections to see what people think overall.

Oh, yeah. You say you need a better title than "Demon chapter 1." I have two suggestions for you. How about "Otherworld" or "Nightfall?" They're not very good but they're ...

Try the Saga of Darren Shan. It's a twelve-book series about vampires, but he portrays them differently to the classic style.

Question: Doesn't the main character have any vampiric powers that will help him escape?

This is exactly like the Book Thief, like others have said. Have you read it? If you have, ask yourself if you just took the idea from that or not. ...

This is a really great piece of work and I want to hear more! Exactly how many people made it to the island and what's going to happen to them? ...

you copied my title. that aint fair. stop, or i'll report you. -Cobra. the real Cobra

Ok thanks for the advice. I was planning on keeping Cobra's appearance quiet until you find out what's strange about him but I will probably work on Hwakshire and the ...

This is a crazy play. Why would people kill each other for no reason? Still, not to hard to act out and it's short.

oookaaay. This play is nuts. It doesn't make any sense at all. But well done for trying.