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Extremely long.. >.< but very good. I really enojoyed it. Nothing much to review on it though. But over-all the characters were vivid and I could relate. The chars. names ...

It's kind of jumbled and scattered. I enjoyed the beginning but like some have said already.. You could expand it with a few more stanzas. It's kind of choppy and ...

Really liked it, It went at a nice fast pace that was easy to follow. Some grammar but that's mostly gone over so i'll leave you to your work. Wish ...

It was great so far.. didn't get through all of it.. but i'm really curious whats going to happen next. Really enjoyed the first few paragraph/prologue Lots of names though, ...