CluelessJay

"water creeps into your ear canals" Before the second stanza should have been a intro to where the water imagery came from. The way you began the first stanza with ...

Hi... there, I'm Jay and this is just a brief review. I like the way you started each stanza the same way though I would've personally ended the last one ...

Hi, there. People have different takes on suicide and whether or not it is a 'good or bad thing'. It seems you have taken both positive and negative perspectives in ...