Clockworks

Haha, it's cute. You might want to consider capitalizing to make it stand out more and make it appear to be more complete as opposed to unfinished. Maybe a period ...

No, you didn't hurt my feelings. :lol: If I never got criticism, I'd never do better.

Thanks, for those who liked it. And thanks for those who didn't. I know it's not the best Haiku and it's relatively unoriginal, not to mention simple and could be ...

Do you know what a Pantoum is Adna? It isn't supposed to flow from one sentence to the next, thus the periods are necessary. I will take one piece of ...

Incandescence, I see your question and answer: because I felt like it. Sure, it's not my best work. It came from an activity and I developed the idea purely out ...

I'm comparing all of the above to bubbles. :) Just thought it might clear a couple things up.

Death with a romantic twist. I guess I got my message through. ^^;