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Heyyyy Dunn! A lovely intro you got there. I especially love the last sentence concluding the intro - it gives a charming tone to the story. Today was cloudy, so ...

Hey Kaila! First off, I'll comment on the title. I really liked it. It got my attention. You've got some good description here: His eyes closed and he leaned in ...

Okay, I'm not a knowledgeable poetry fiend (hence the reason why this is my first poetry post), but I felt the need to express that I did enjoy this poem. ...

Hey Star! Here I be, to review your work, dahling. ^_~ Jack Stevens, an ordinary, common name, but a name that I despise. I hadn't minded it until recently, when ...

Hey Kinzy! I will be your friendly little reviewer. :3 “Yeah. I know. No really Mom I’m fine. Yeah, I’ll call you tomorrow with the date. I love you too. ...

Hey Angel! I am here as requested. ^^ Mindy grazed her fingers over the dusty keys. As she closed her eyes, the music that she repressed for so long, became ...

Hey KJ - man, you are a piggy bank of stories! I'm envious, I could never spin them out this fast. My mother had always been vain. The reflection in ...

Connnraaad. He felt another boot between his ribs. It didn’t hurt as bad as the many others before it, but it was enough to make him caw with pain. This ...

Olivia!! I am here, your faithful fan. I'm going to do a line-by-line review, because I feel like it. ^^ The amount of calories that would be burned in getting ...

Hey Ashley! Hooray, more~ Lana sometimes wished that she could be as free as they could, able to fly wherever their heart desired Eh, this is a very cliche thought. ...

Hey Sapphire! I am your friendly reviewer for today. ^^ There was no answer when Josh knocked on the door that the singing was coming from . He opened it ...

Hey Kylan! You need to PM me when you post... send out the bat signal... I love your stories! Eli aimed the gun to the woman's head with steady hands, ...

Hey angel! Germaine stood on the front porch of a vacant house . In her arms weeping softly was Levin her boyfriend of three years. You need a comma in ...

Hey Ashley! I'm drawn in by the title. Mmm, strawberries. :P This page is contorted - I think your line break is too long. Try shortened it to snap the ...

Hey Happy! I see the word asylum, and that's always a good sign to me. >=D Nitpicks The elderly man slouched in his chair and shook his head violently as ...