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Hey Juicebox! --- The year, 2113, the earth finally built its first station beyond the moon. The structuring of this sentence is rather odd. You have two commas in there, ...

Hey Anshita! I know you need reviews, and we have a place where you can post a link and ask people for reviews, rather than you bumping your own thread. ...

Hey Con-Bon. I'm here -- eventually! See? I'm not a complete liar. I was weighing between your science-fiction and your fantasy story, and I decided fantasy was more of my ...

The topic of this poem is timeless, and should be the subject of many odes and epic tales. The last line is particularly genius, as it is a sentiment that ...

Hola Sugah! --- She held her hand farther out the window, catching a snowflake in the soft fabric of her mitten. She looks around, the grandfather clock was still. Most ...

Angie, I always love reading your work, darling, so here I am! --- The morphine didn't kick in yet. Paul held the beer bottle to his head. Hands smudged in ...

Evi! I have arrived, after some time. I like the title you finally chose! ^_^ --- With the door open, the howling wind from the street battled with the stagnant ...

Connie-Mc-Sushi, it's been awhile since I've reviewed something of yours. --- At last he reached the top. From here he could see the red dusty expanse of the Arizona desert, ...

Ky! Hannah raced me to review this; little did she know, I wouldn't come around for a few days to finish off my review. HAHA! Though, looking at her review, ...

Ky! I can't believe I'm first up. This has been sitting here all day, and I've been eying it, and I would've sworn people would've beat me to it. You've ...

Hey TheThing! I will be your reviewer right now, and let's see what you got here, eh. I'm not going to read the review before me, so I'm sorry if ...

Hello Eraqio! I don't typically do poetry reviews, but I'm going to try to give the best review I can! :) --- Valleys, all choked up with dust. No reason ...

Hey Tiff! After trying way too long to figure out where I had left off with this story, here I am. @_@ --- The next day I awoke to the ...

Hey Rosey! This is my first review on my supposed reviewing-fest, so let me warm up. *does jumping jacks* --- The earth grated, sending stone dust tumbling on my head. ...

Hey Dr. Awesome! Here I am, upon request! I haven't review an Action piece in a long time. --- “Mr. Renshaw?” The desk clerk’s voice caught him halfway to the ...