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Yeah, the part about his mother could use a lot of work. I'm currently writing her into the story, but I realize now I ought to of waited until later ...

Thanks! Nimbus is actually the one thing I don't hate about this novel. He's kinda fun to write.

Thanks for another review! About the characters, well, what can I say? I like to reveal things over time. Some of the characters that seem wooden and calloused at the ...

Thank you for the review! To clear a few things up, I chose to make The Provider like that in order to better mimic how real-world dictators act. Often it ...

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Thank you for another awesome review! I'm happy to hear that you think my characters are good, that means a lot to me. And to answer your question, this is ...

Thank you so much for your review!

Cool. If you don't mind me asking, are you going to try to get it published?

Thanks for the nitpicks, I'll definitely fix those sooner or later! Yeah, it feels weird to write something without him dropping the F-bomb every sentence. Thanks again for the review, ...

Thanks! I'm glad you're liking the story!

Once again, thank you for another awesome review! I'm so glad you're enjoying my story, I can not express how grateful I am!

Thank you for the review! In good time you'll see what has become of Celsko, for I have a clear view of where I want to take the book. :) ...

I know how you feel.