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Mt. Everest, which is located in Nepal and was severely effected by the earthquake, is often referred to as the "Roof of the world". Perhaps that is what the author ...

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Thank you for the review! Yeah, I kinda find the overuse of the one word sentences a bit pretentious too. If I ever get around to revising I'll work on ...

Thank you so much for your kind words!

Ha, I'm glad that you noticed the politics behind it. Without going into too much detail, I'm neither democrat or republican, I like to stick to the middle. Being set ...

You're back! Thank you for the review, I'm glad you actually think Celsko is 'fleshed out'. I think she's kinda cliche, but that's just me. Anyway, I'm really glad you're ...

Thanks! It always amazes me how the typos fly right over my head. It's like, I re-read every single sentence right after I write it, how can I not find ...

Thank you!

Yeah, I get what you're saying about pruning it a bit, it definitely needs it. Thanks for the great review!

And just as a side note, I do like writing short-stories. Novels are fun when you're actually good at them. I think I'm going to take your advice and start ...

I don't want harsh criticism, simply advice on how to better my novel. I've never taken any writing classes or anything like that, so advice is all I can really ...

Dump a novel I've been working on for the last four months? Hell no. No matter how terrible my novel is, I'm going to finish it. Regarding my age, I'm ...

Yes, I know it's quite bad. I'm not in any way pleased with this chapter. It's much worse than previous chapters. The thing was, when typing this chapter, I had ...

Sorry I haven't gotten around to thanking you for the review! So... Thank you very much!

Thanks! I'm glad you noticed the similarities between The Provider and Stalin, I definitely have Hitler and Stalin in mind when I write his character. I find figures from history ...