Cinderquill

Hi! Cinderquill here to give a review! Hopefully it's helpful. Since this is a prologue, maybe I shouldn't be expecting too much to happen in a prologue. But I have ...

Hi! Cinderquill here to write a review! Hopefully it's helpful. I think the information that you included at the beginning before the chapter officially starts could be incorporated in the ...

Hi! Cinderquill here to provide a hopefully helpful review! This story contains a good use of imagery and advanced vocabulary that made the story interesting to me as a reader. ...

Hi! I´m here to give a quick review! I´ve never experienced the death of a relative before, but I do relate to not being very connected to my relatives, especially ...

Hoi! Just passing by to write a review! I'm usually not the best at reviews, but I'll try my best to give you some hopefully helpful advice! This chapter was ...

I really liked this poem a lot! I think it delivers a powerful message regarding society and its standards, and I related a lot to this poem while reading it. ...

Hi! Just passing by and giving a review! I'm not the best at reviews though, but I hope what I have to say is helpful! This story contains a lot ...

I´ve never really reviewed poetry before so I´m not sure how helpful this review is going to be... But I would like to start off by saying that I liked ...

I have to say, I really likes this flash-fiction story! I had to write one for a school assignment recently, and it was hard for me to fit an entire ...

I think this is a good start! This is a good introductory chapter as it introduces the characters in the story. But there's a lot of stuff that I'm going ...

From what I'm reading so far, I like the plot of this story so far! The chapter has a good plot structure, and it has a nice flow to it. ...