ChurlishLassy

and she was holding onto a Jane Austin book like it was a grenade. It was a very interesting site for an out doors cafe. I like the comparing the ...

I really liked it. The title got me to read it, but i didn't know it was a song then. The title is rather generic, for a song title. Otherwise ...

AT first it gave me goose bumps. But then i think you prolonged it too much. One or two many extra stanzas. I know it is hard to drop anything, ...

I like it but even poems this short can be improved, "then glancing" can be turned into thn holding, and I feel that "in ignorance" can easily be turned to ...

I liked it overall, but when you said "Do they like me for who I am or what I have become" Who you are and what you have become are ...

as a sharp wind lashed out with claws of steel. .) I liked the imagery alot. But it could be more coherhent. I have trouble with coherhence often myself, overall ...