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Thanks for the review! And the parallel theory is very close, tip of the iceburg actually, and what I want the readers to guess at for now- hopefully I can ...

I just posted the second chapter, if you want to check it out :D

I just posted the second chapter, if you want to check it out :D

Thank you so much for the review :) it really helps. I also have a Prologue, just in case you haven't read it, and it may give some more background ...

No problem! That's interesting stuff :)

Thank you, again. These first chapters I wrote a year ago and so it's very helpful to see where to go back and fix things. You asked all the right ...

Thank you, again. These first chapters I wrote a year ago and so it's very helpful to see where to go back and fix things. You asked all the right ...

Thank you so much! This helped a lot. I always have trouble writing first/introduction chapters- I'm better at describing action than the mundane lol. I'm not sure if you've read ...

I like how this is going so far- you have a pretty strong narration. I'm interested to see how the sci-fi themes will play out. One thing that could make ...