Chomperlover

First of all I really liked it. I love the whole concept of your poem and how you worked it in. I think you slipped up a few places in ...

Wow I really like your poem, especially the ending. The rhyming is off in a few in a few places but it's not very bad. I really like how you ...

Well overall I really like your poem. At the begininng the rhyming starts off very well and it flows very nicely. The rhymes fit in well with the way you ...

Overall I thought the poem flowed very well. I really like how you worded it in the end. I would just like to say that at the very beginning it ...