ChocolateCello

Thank you for all of this! I don't write short stories often so this is really helpful! (I would say more but im on a mobile device and its hard ...

Ahhhhhhh yessss!

Thank you for all the feedback! I'll definitely be taking this all into account and I'll looks into some other short stories to help me get the hang of things. ...

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it so much!

Ugh, we're going to have to find a permanent way to fix this formatting

Hey, so I'm really close with someone who struggled with depression a few years back. They came close to making a very drastic decision, but I'm happy to say they're ...

OHHH I REMEMBER PUT LIKE A 1 or some crap after the title before putting up the next part (Did you see my edits?)

Thank you for all this feedback! This really helped!

Yup! Supernatural! *pumps fist in the air* The SPN fandom is EVERYWHERE

I would review but that seems like a cheat... :P

Hey! I love the poem and you really seem to be an amazing writer but I feel the need to point out that 'Where the Sidewalk Ends' is the name ...

Thanks! This helped! (I had written a response to your first question while on a mobile device but It didn't sent. I wrote this around 1:30 in the morning and ...

Thanks! Glad to know you enjoyed it! Do you by any chance have a suggestion on what to change 'little noise' to? I've considered 'sudden pop' and ' horrid noise' ...

Haha, thanks, glad to know you enjoyed it! Would it be worth it to change to 'the little sound my toast makes when it's ready with the toast?"

Glad to know you enjoyed the poem! Thanks for all the suggestions too!