ChocolateCello

I'm methodist but I don't do a lot of worship- My church pretty laid back for the most part

Hey! Cello here! So I saw a comment saying this didn't really 'feel like a poem'. Honestly, I agree. It was enjoyable to read but not very poetic. Now, I'm ...

It didn't notify you?!? I tagged you! Maybe I spelled it wrong- sorry Thanks for the review!

One of two meanings! Glad you got that though- I was afraid it would be to confusing. Thanks for the feedback!

Thank you for all the feedback!

Thank you!!!

I'm honored that you spent so much time editing my work ;)

Hey! So I'm back for the second part. Honestly, not a lot to say. Keep an eye on the tenses. You slipped up a few times. Also, there's a lot ...

Hey! Cello here- Minor suggestion I just thought of Maybe say 'The bright blue box Inside, a mad man' just a suggestion, maybe reword it a bit idk, but then ...

So maybe something like where demons are said to live or where all demons can be seen?

Okay- I lied about not caring about the syllables- Are any of these good or is it better to leave it? Where many find their demons Where they say you ...

Ah! The online syllable counter lied! (I suck at counting syllables so...) I doulbel checked and you're right, I've missed quite a few characteristics of the haiku but that's okay- ...

Anyone want to count my syllables?

Glad you like it

Okay first off- best gif ever Second- the part where you said 'does that make sense?' actually brought up really good point. I was thinking that she was attacked, passed ...