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Re: Murdered Last Night
Hey! ChocolateCello here! I'm new to reviewing but I have a few comments. Over all, I really liked the poem. It tells a story very well and had a very ...
Jun 29, 2015 -
Re: There Was a Girl...
Hey! This was amazing! I loved how you managed to be vague and still very direct. (That's not quite the wording I'm looking for but...) Everything was described wonderfully. So, ...
Jun 28, 2015 -
Re: Airplane
Hey! Okay, so I'm not the best with reviews but... First off, your transitions between the different times were really good. It all flowed smoothly and tied together well. Second, ...
Jun 27, 2015