Chloe(:

Three years have passed Though it feels like three days Maybe rephrase the second line? And shriveling my lungs I don't see why you need the 'and' there. Those are ...

I love Harry Potter! Okay . . . Yeah, put a space between the sentences and the periods. But I don't think it's that confusing when you change to first ...

Here's your review. Yes! You can definitely send it to a contest. You told me to be harsh . . . Well, there's not much to be harsh about though. ...

Here is your review! It's a little confusing, but well written. I will read the next parts of your story when you post them up. A stick of metal just ...

Here's your review! It was really good, but soon you're going to need to have something happen, or else it'll get boring. Just saying. On to the review. Ahch” I ...

Okay, here's the review you asked for I looked around at the murky surroundings, and at once I knew that I wasn’t supposed to be here. I started running down ...

Lol I love the end. I noticed that before some sentences there are spaces and others there are none. Just change that. What inspired you to write this poem? I'd ...

Wow, my real name is Chloe. And that's one reason why I had to review this. Funny isn't it? On to the review: even the flat grey of the car ...

Here's your review, I can't do much, cause mostly everything I have has been put up there. But I thought it was really good and you should write more. At ...

Here's the review you asked for! The wind got caught in the park trees , as it mingled and danced with the voices of the people relaxing on the grass ...

A writers dreams, are like a crazy persons thoughts or maybe his thoughts, are just what that crazy person does whatever the case, his art sets him free, he opens ...

* I was nearly lying in my food when I heard a light clank of metal hitting metal. I sighed and looked up. It was a boy…with light hair and ...