ChiravianSkies

Hi, I'm Maddie and I'll be here to review this work. Can I start with the fact that tiny tears are at my eyes at this moment? I honestly can ...

Hey, I'm Maddie and I'm here to review your work! You have found my otp. (My Harry Potter OTP, but an OTP nonetheless.) Couple spelling errors in there. They're easy ...

Hi, I'm Maddie and I'll be reviewing your work! I've been secretly following this story, and only now have just been getting the strength to review it. Gutless me is ...

Hullo! I'm Maddie and I'll be reviewing your work! I giggled a bit at the part with the single-bullet-gun thing, so congratulations on that. I've noticed a couple technical errors ...

Hi. I'm Maddie and will be reviewing your work! I'll be pointing things out as I read, so yeah. :) (I thought that prior meant in between that time. So, ...

Hullo! Maddie here as requested. Can I go and say that there's a lot of information in the prologue? Lots of previous reviewers said it, and I most definitely agree. ...

Hi, I'm Maddie and I'll be reviewing your work. I haven't read your novel, nor can I find it, but nonetheless, I'm here to review. So let's get started. On ...

I'm Maddie and I'll be reviewing Ah, the dreaded Valentines day... The day that brought me to tears because I couldn't make cards for fourteen people over a month... Ah. ...

Eeesh, dragon bile. It just sounds disgusting, doesn't it? Maddie again, reviewing this story. (Thanks for telling me.) I didn't see any grammarly problems in here, so good on you. ...

Guten Morgen, SnazzyPencil. I'm Maddie and I'll be reviewing your work. Your story's a bit confusing. It seems to be all over the place, and I understand this is to ...

I'm Maddie and I'll be reviewing your work! Ooh de lally, where do I start with this review? Maybe with the nitpicks. The double spacing is very hard to tell ...

Hi, I'm Maddie and I'll be reviewing your work! You've definitely got something going on here. This doesn't seem to have the easily resolvable plot of a short story, so ...

Hi, I'm Maddie and I'll be reviewing your work. Your title immediately caught me and sucked me in, so here I am. :) On matters of plot, the plot was ...

Maddie again, here to review! Yay! This chapter got even better and I didn't have to read through the modern times! Apologies, but that chapter just can't compare to these. ...

Bonjour, once more! I'm actually really surprised that nobody has pounced on this yet, seeing as it's only a chapter two. XD But anyways, on to the review! Yes! I ...