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Re: Breaker of Chains - Chapter One
G'day! It's the Chirave Canicthus here to review your work! First off, I kinda like how you put this right in the situation. It made things feel more urgent in ...
Aug 25, 2015 -
Re: Old Lives - Chapter 3
Hullo! It's me, the Chirave Canicthus, here to catch up on this story and hopefully bring it closer to "Out of the GR." Miles is too awesome. He seems to ...
Jun 26, 2015 -
Re: The Secret of the Flutterby
G'day! It's the Chirave Canicthus here to review your work! Now, let's start with the beginning. Nobody's really touched on it yet, so I don't want to give you a ...
Jun 24, 2015 -
Re: I swear to Gosh I'll fight back.
Hey. It's the Chirave Canicthus here to review this beautiful GR work. A look at the title, I'm not really sure you should add that Gosh in there. I'm assuming ...
Jun 13, 2015 -
Re: The Heart of Silver Gold: Chapter One
Good day. It's just me, the Chirave Canicthus, here to review your work today, though I was a bit late to the GR party. XD So, you didn't really request ...
Jun 13, 2015 -
Re: Old Lives - Chapter 2
Bonjour, Biscuit. It's the Chirave Canicthus here to review your chapter today. Gretzky? Did somebody say Gretzky around a hockey fan? (Read: Flames fan.) Well, anyways, that one especially crazy, ...
Jun 5, 2015 -
Re: Guardian Angel, Chapter 3
Guten Nachtmahl, it's the Chirave Canicthus here to review your work! I haven't read your other chapters before and am actually kind of amazed nobody has reviewed this. Maybe nobody ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: The World of Secrecy Chapter Two "Rough Draft"
Bonjour, Mon ami! The Chirave Canicthus is here to review your work! Well, I saw this under the art section, and thought that I was going to get a lovely ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: Socrates the Madman - Chapter Two
Hey! It's the Chirave Canicthus here for a review! Once this little cue of reviews I've got up is done, I think I'll be done reviewing for the day. Well, ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: Robin Hood - Chapter Four
Hey! It's the Chirave Canicthus here to rescue this chapter from the Green Room! (Sorry if I keep typing this, it's just helpful to see what's green room and what ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: Children Of Shadows Chapter Eight
Bonjour, Kevin, Mon Ami! It's the Chirave Canicthus/Maddie here to kick this out from the bottomless pit of the green room! As a first note, I haven't gone through your ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: Red Velvet Terminology
Hey, it's just the Chirave Canicthus here to brush up on what's going on. (And to point out a few grammar errors.) This explains a crudload more, then. Now I ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: Silver Ashes- chapter 1 and 2
It's just me here, the Chirave Canicthus, here to kick this out from the bottomless pit known as the Green Room! Ooh-de-Lally, where do I start? Sure, this is all ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: Souls (Red Velvet Chapter 2)
Hey! It's the Chirave Canicthus here to kick this chapter from the (seemingly) bottomless pit of the green room. On a first note, I haven't gone through and read your ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: Coldware (Part 1: Software) -- Chapter Six
Hey! It's the Chirave Canicthus/Maddie here to kick this lovely chapter from the seemingly bottomless pit that is the review room. On a first note, I'd like to say that ...
May 31, 2015