Chirantha

Hmm, this is probably the first time I'm reviewing a present tense story. :D I think I'll give a shot at it. Mistakes Knock, knock, knock. I shake my head, ...

Hi Incognito, I won't go one rambling about the story yet, okay? But, I have to tell you, it was an extremely uncommon story. But I kinda liked it. :D ...

Hi Foxfire, Well, now this is a rather mysterious story. It was sort of hard to understand, but I got some parts at the least. :D Mistakes It was at ...

Awww...this is a really sweet poem. I presume you are writing about your self here? But, the poem could have been made a little longer and giving us a little ...

Hey nativecatcher. Welcome to the best site in the whole world. :D Before I review this, I should probably tell you that there is a 4:1 ratio for reviewing and ...

Awww, missed it again. I'm really sorry for not reviewing this earlier. Mistakes and I looked uncomfortably around Seems better to write, "I looked around, uncomfortably" exchange for doing the ...

Okay, now that's a really powerful poem. Let me do a little nit-picking before going to the overall part. Mistakes a blade as sharp as the welder’s mind, I have ...

Uhh...Snoink, I don't think it's spelling mistakes that she is having. Its full of grammatical mistakes. Don't worry, I'll try to fix them. :) Mistakes , Was it a dream ...

Hey there, Audy. This was a nice and sweet poem, written by pointing out the troubles and then coming to a conclusion at the end. I like the way how ...

Here I am Classy, just as you requested. Okay, I'll go straight to it, Mistakes “Alice!” I heard out of the ear that my iPod speakers weren’t blasting through. You ...

Hey Mo, I'm here as you requested. Ooh, nice story. You have made a nice use of the figurative language to add colour into your story, well done. The point ...

Here I am, as you asked. Nice story by the way. Okay, I'll point out the mistakes, and other things. Mistakes And if you haven't been born from a flyer, ...

Awww, I couldn't review this first. :cry: Oh well, better late than never. I like this idea. The idea of having a private island only for the pirates. I thought ...

Ahh! Finaly, the vampire genius returns to story writing. :D Hmm, although I've read this before, it seems too serious now. Too deep and complex. But I like it. So..... ...

It's my pleasure to review one of the best stories ever written in the YWS. :D Haha, I laughed so hard when I saw Kyran had chocolate. I love to ...