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*Park cop; my main point is that If you ever watched the Gossip Girl tv series, those kids actually do illegal things but can get out of them fairly easy, ...

There's a reason why I made their names so similar it adds on to my plot! But thank you for the review it means a lot! I only intend to ...

Thank you! I actually had to edit out a lot of the description I put in because there's a max word count, but thank you for your comment!

I really like the way you write. It's unique, different (in a good way haha), and very eye catching. Nowadays I just read things from people that have no taste, ...

Nice introduction! Definitely caught my idea! I love what you're going for. I also enjoy the way you write, it's very different yet easy to read and casual. Good job! ...

Beautiful poem! I really enjoyed what you have written here. Is this poem based on personal experiences?

I like the concept of the idea here, but I would recommend changing the structure of the poem and make it less "awkward" in a way. Other than that, beautiful ...

Resubmitted a much more improved copy of the first chapter! I'll be posting more here or you can just catch me on at ayookimchiii !

Thank you! That means alot, I'm actually posting more chapters at a website called my username is ayookimchiii so look me up!