ChimpanzeeMinkey

I just have to say I LOVED this! I don't even know if I understand exactly what it's saying I just love the flow and all the brilliant word combinations ...

Short. Simple. Bloody. Absolutely brilliant!!! I really loved this it's one of the best things I've read since joining. Keep up the good work :)

Thank you everyone for your lovely comments and advice. I'll try to keep everything you've pointed out in mind in future writings :)

I thought this was absolutely beautiful. It has a very poetic feeling to it and it captures the fathers inner struggle very well. I'm sure I just sound like a ...