ChildofEden

Mind if I take a crack at it? Thank you! I really think this could have been a spectacular piece if it didn't sound like you didn't mean for it ...

I liked it in the sense that it made me think back to the butterfly and roller coaster feelings of Jr. High. To quote Demeter, "It made me smile." However, ...

Well, the good news is, I really liked some of these phrases. You really had something going. The bad new is, it was really hard to read with all the ...

Considering Purple is my favorite color, I had to take a look at this. I agree with others here: a lot of this just seems like ongoing angst. Not that ...

Mind if I take a crack at it? I liked a lot of the phrases, but quite honestly, I got bored very quickly. Maybe less pondering? It sounds like all ...

I like the idea, because it's the much loved cliche of every girl who's ever had her heart broken. However, when I read this, the first thought was "word spew" ...